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this is my very fist entry soooo yah! on btw this is a fluff!! sorry for bad spelling!!!          




 Your walking to kidds house in your fav (f\c) hoddie, and your red pants. You'v been dating kidd for a long time now,it feels like forever from the last time you seen him! of course you were symmetrical,he hated anything you had that was not. You knocked on the door to see Liz anwsered it.'' oh hay (name)...on kids in his room, me and patty were just leaving.'' She gave u a wink and walked out the door patty following behind. You went up stars and into his room to find him trying to get a painting symmetrical. you slowly walk up to him." boo!'' He threw a fist at u. You caught it! '' That's not a good way to greet your girlfriend kidd.'' He blushed not know it was u. '' sorry (name) i didn't know it was u.'' '' its o-k!'' You jumped on him making him fall on the bed. You kissed him deeply. He kissed you back hold your head. You finally broke the kiss for need of air. You leaned over to his ear and said, '' Get a little exsided are we?'' you purred in his ear, causing him to blush deeply. You looked down to see a his pants had pulled half way don't. you stocked his member causing to groan. ''_..(name)__''


sorry i'm gonna make another one plz tell me if it should be lemon or not kk?
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Starstablefreak101 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
ok if any of those comments were insults then stop. This is great work. Insulting the work Moonbear123456 put into this deserves to be complimented. If you dont have anything NICE to put on the comments then dont say shit. it pisses me off when people insult. If they arent insults then my bad but thats what they look like. Keep up the good work moonbear. Loved it :D
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2ollexu2 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
ENGLISH MOTHERFUCKER! DO YOU SPEAK IT!?
also this is a lime
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
I never write in text writing 
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Kinana-Edolas Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
Please go to scool and learn to write before you do this please
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DragoonDraconian Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Good but, could you please not use texting shortcuts? You not u, please, not . I can bear bad grammar, but that is just painful.
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88Kiddo-Kun88 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
OMG IS HALLERIOUS supernosebleed emoticon 
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hikarulover4242564 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Why did it have too end
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tetocat100 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
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FilypaWishes Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
:iconlemonadeplz:
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asiabunny12 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
keeping goingCrying 
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SoulEaterBaby05 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Waffle.... that is all
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LucaTheShewolf Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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XD
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AYLA-SECURA Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Short but good
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animegeak Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
pretty good for a first timer
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Moonbear123456 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
Naaaa thanks
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animegeak Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
your welcome
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MaidoNeko Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Please Make More Of This
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Moonbear123456 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
I did look on my page i have part 2 and 3
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Lemon
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:iconmessed-up-cinderella:
Moreeeeeeeeee
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sebbysmaster13 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
yes another one
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sebbysmaster13 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
yes make it a lemon
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Moonbear123456 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
really cus i really think i suck at this
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8888DeathTheKid Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YES MAKE ANOTHER
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Moonbear123456 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
ok i will i'm writing it right now
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8888DeathTheKid Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay
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Moonbear123456 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Lol I sooo bad at this its my vary first soooo sorry tell me if I should make tne next one lemon
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